描述人物形容词名词集聚一体的句子该怎样表述
2024-12-15 19:16:05 学考宝 作者:佚名
问题描述
老师这句话怎样修改更为准确?类似这样的句型该怎样表述?
He has shot curly black hair, small black eyes, a round face and a small nose.
老师答疑
曹老师:
He has shot curly black hair, small black eyes, a round face and a small nose.
修改:
He has short black curly hair, with a small nose and small black eyes on his round face.
追问:2017/04/30 00:41
I hadn't paid attention to him until he gave me a help. 这句话的时态对吗?
回答:这句话时态没有错误。
追问:2017/04/30 01:11
老师再请问,当指代同一个人时,应当说
She is my mother and my friend.
还是 She is my mother and friend.
回答:应该用第二句。没必要重复my。英语最忌讳没必要的重复。
追问:2017/04/30 01:53
请问如果我把句子变为:
She is slim, with short black hair, and balck eyes and a small nose. 这样表述对吗?
改为:She is a slim girl with short black hair, black eyes and a small nose.
加上girl,让with介词短语作定语。句子只用一个逗号,一个and.
追问:2017/04/30 02:06
He is a warm and intellegent, capable and generous but also hardworking people.
请问我这样表述可以吗?
一个名词的前置定语一般很少超过三个,四个就是极限了。
people是复数,不能说He is a people. 改成形容词做表语。这样就避免了名词前过多的定语。
He is an intellegent, able man who is generous, warm-hearted and hardworking.